Friday, November 8, 2013

Who needs that? You do! - Blog #4

So have to admit to you, I skipped the last blog post about the actual researching for the research essay. But I promise I actually did the research! Actually, a lot of it...Phew! Thank goodness that's over (sorta).  Today's blog post is about making an annotated bibliography. Oh no! Normally, just the sound of having to do a bibliography stresses me out, but what the heck is an annotated one?! Fear not! An annotated bibliography isn't as scary as it sounds. It simply just analyzes the article or passage you are citing. Part of the process uses something called a CRAAP analysis. The name makes you kind of chuckle, doesn't it? I think that makes the work a little more enjoyable. Anyhow, I'll get moving to show you my five sources in my annotated bibliography.

 
Annotated Bibliography
 

"Deirdre Zimmerman." Global Ministries: The United Methodist Church. The Board of Global Ministries, Apr. 2009. Web.

This article is a credible source for my research because it is a first-hand account of a nutritionist missionary. The author's credentials include being a part of the Board of Global Ministries. The article was published in April of 2009. The author's main goal in this article is to inform others of a woman's journey in the nutrition field as a missionary. The publishing source for this article generally targets an audience that fits the following description: missionary, nutritionist, potential nutritionist missionary. This audience would be interested in this subject because they can read about a personal experience and would generally agree with this author's perspective on the topic. The author incorporates the following types of evidence: direct quotes on Deirdre's perspective. This evidence builds credibility because it is very personal and there is no middle man but it is also limited because it is the story of one person. Based on my own research, I agree with this author because it Deirdre's opinion and her credibility not only as a nutritionist, but as a missionary. I think this article is important to include in my essay because it adds first-hand account of missionary work.

Getz, Lindsey. "Dietitians Abroad." Today's Dietitian Apr. 2012: 48. Today's Dietitian. Great Valley Publishing Company. Web. 4 Nov. 2013.

This article is a credible source because it comes from a specialized dietetic and nutrition magazine. The author's credentials include professional growth specialization in the nutrition field. This article was published in Today's Dietitian in April of 2012. The author's main goal of this article is to inform dietetic professionals about the benefits of working overseas. The publishing source for this article generally targets: Clinical dietitians, consultant dietitians, clinical nutrition counselors, food service managers, certified diabetes educators, primary health coaches, and pharmaceutical professionals. This audience would be interested in this subject because it deals with professional growth and would generally agree with the author's perspective. The author incorporates the following types of evidence: multiple professionals all over the world and their varying experiences. This evidence builds credibility because these are actual professionals but it's limited because there are no stories of failed trips. Based on my own research, I agree with this author because these professionals always gian something but not always with their career. I think this article is important to include in my essay because it brings up many of my essay points, not just one.

"Health Missionaries: Called to Serve Him." The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints. Intellectual Reserve, 22 Mar. 2011. Web.

This article is a credible source for my research because it talks about how it is part of our mission as God's children to spread health. The article was published in 2011 on March 22. The author's main goal in this article is to teach about the missionary role in health. The publishing source for this article generally targets a missionary audience. This audience would be interested in this subject because most missionaries are constantly trying to find ways to serve others better through God and would generally agree with this author's perspective. The author incorporates scripture quotation and explanation as evidence. This evidence builds credibility because it is scripture we all read as Christians but is also limited because not all people interpret scripture in that way. Based on my own opinion, I agree with this author because it provides good evidence and reasons. I think this article is important to include in my essay because it gives reason to be a nutritionist missionary through scripture.

Saunders Pickling, Marie. "The Role of the Nutritionist." Ministry: International Journal for Pastors 7 (1947): 112-13. Web.

This article is a credible source for my research because it is from a Ministry Journal. The author's credentials include being a part of the missionary field. The article was published in 1947 in March so the article is not recent, but it is still relevant. The author's main goal in this article is to inform others that physical health focus is also important in the missionary field. The publishing source for this article generally targets pastors, theologists, and missionaries. This audience would be interested in this subject because it shows how Christians can reach out and take care of others in different ways and would agree with this author's perspective. The author incorporates scripture quotation and reasoning and nutritional information as evidence. This evidence builds credibility because it involves the two subjects it is writing about but is also limited because it is nutritional information from the 1940's and there are new studies out today. Based on my own research, I agree with this author because she provides very sound and convincing evidence. I think this article is important to include in my essay because it is information I have found from other articles as well, to be true.

Zellman, Kathleen. "It Takes a Village to Fight Clinical Malnutrition." Food and Nutrition. Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics, 26 Aug. 2013. Web.

This article is a credible source for my research because is deals with Health and crisis. The author's credentials include being the director of Nutrition of WebMD. The article was published in August of 2013. The author's main goal in this article is persuade others to become involved in the nutrition field. The publishing source for this article generally targets an audience that is involved in nutrition and activism. This audience would be interested in this subject because it involves a health crisis and would generally agree with this author's perspective on the topic. The author incorporates facts about the crisis as evidence. This evidence builds credibility because it shows shocking statistics but is also limited because it is only from one area. Based on my own research, I agree with this author because she proves an interesting point. I think this article is important to include in my essay because it isn't about a third world country, it's about our own area.

1 comment:

  1. Your bibliography encompasses a helpful mix of secular and faith-based sources, which is an important mix for your research. I am curious how you unearthed the source from 1947; that' pretty old! You wisely point out in your annotation that newer studies have been published; I think adding a recent academic book or journal article to your repertoire would be beneficial.

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